Hey Dan, I thought your pitch was very well crafted. You are very well spoken and I enjoyed listening to it. They lottery part was great, it added humor and allowed you to cite a statistic. In your next pitch try to tell me what you specifically want me to peer review. I think you prepare very well for this pitch, it flowed well, and your revenue stream sounds good too.
Dan, I love your sarcastic intro. Very dry humor... after that your got straight to the point, which was related to your sarcasm! Bonus points. You had a few points where you had a slight pause. This could be eradicated with a few more practice try’s. Overall, I thought it was a great idea and pitch. (Similar idea to mine!) Thanks for sharing, -April
Hey Dan, I thought your pitch was very well crafted. You are very well spoken and I enjoyed listening to it. They lottery part was great, it added humor and allowed you to cite a statistic. In your next pitch try to tell me what you specifically want me to peer review. I think you prepare very well for this pitch, it flowed well, and your revenue stream sounds good too.
ReplyDeleteDan, I love your sarcastic intro. Very dry humor... after that your got straight to the point, which was related to your sarcasm! Bonus points. You had a few points where you had a slight pause. This could be eradicated with a few more practice try’s. Overall, I thought it was a great idea and pitch. (Similar idea to mine!) Thanks for sharing, -April
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