"Look out for that fastball"

After the first pitch assignment, I received some feedback from two of my classmates.  I also provided my own internal feedback for completing the current assignment.  From my classmates I learned that I should practice the delivery to alleviate a few “Uh “and “Ums” that crept into my pitch.  I was also told that I had some dead space, which is probably where I was trying to remember my previous bullet points.

For this pitch, I decided to conduct several more trial runs than the previous video.  I also worked with fewer bullet points.  I knew the point that I was trying to deliver, and my only bullet points were actual statistics.  I am confident with delivering an impromptu speech, as I do it constantly at work.  So, for the video I went with a more impromptu style of delivery.  I know the product better now than before.  Especially since we have been doing our own market research over the past several weeks. I also chose not to discuss the price of the service, as each person is going to be different depending on need.  My goal for the video was just to get you interested.  I mean isn’t that how sales work in general.